邹秀娣

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2017.6

My hobbies

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五年级

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 U4 Hobbies

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Different people have different hobbies. Such as sailing, climbing and mountain biking. But my hobbies are swimming and painting.
  I timidity when I was a children. So my parents wanted me to swim. After that, I’m very like swimming. I spend some of my free time swimming for swimming pool. I think I will like to swimming all the time.
  Painter is my dream. During the summer holiday of 2007. I spend one mouth on a painting training . And I portrait of good painting. This painting gave me a great encouragement.
  Hobbies will bring me happiness. I hope can also bring you happiness.

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