记录人

杨鹂

记录时间

2018/1/18

文本标题

My winter holiday

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作文

适用年级

六年级

适用单元及板块

第三单元、期末复习

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I had a happy winter holiday because I did many interesting things.  
I went to the beach and I swam in the sea.I called my friend and played with them.I visited my grandparents and ate much delicious food.
Then I went to the zoo whit my sister.I was very happy.Because I saw a lot of animals.They were very lovely.So I took photos of all animals.I liked the butterflies best.They were colourful and beautiful.My sister liked it too.  
last ,I climb the mountain,I think it's stimulate.  I am happy.
  I had a wonderful summer holiday this year.What about you? Can you tell me something about it?

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短文围绕My holiday的主题进行了寒假生活的描述，整体上看，结构清晰，内容丰富，句式多样，句型上则采用六年级关键的过去时态，和教材前三单元内容相符，同时和即将到来的寒假生活接轨，是学生诵读模仿的典范。