记录人

邹秀娣

记录时间

2018.4

文本标题

 My country

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适用年级

六年级

适用单元及板块

 U6 An interesting country

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My country has so many great places of interest ,which is known not only to every citizen ,but also to the world .When the foreigners talk about China ,they all extend their thums and say"En...China is a famous and fantastic country !"Yes,that's ture ! We have the Great Wall ,the world's second longest river ,the oldest history and the most glorious culture .As wa all know ,China is one of the largest countries in the world ,when it is snowing in the north ,the flowers have come out in the south ,when the people in the south are enjoying the sunshine on the beach ,the people in the north are skiing on the ice .How marvelous it is !So now I can speak to the world loudly "My country is really great !My country is really beautiful !

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短文围绕country的主题进行了阐述，符合学生自身情况，整体上看，结构清晰，内容丰富，句式多样，是学生诵读模仿的典范，更能让学生的爱国情感得以升华。